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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2015 11:46 am 
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This strip, panel 6--Capt. Tagon's rank insignia seem to be missing.

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Following the above, the next two strips seem to have the same problem. Monday's may just be the way he's standing, but Tuesday's strip looks like the at least one bolt should be partially showing.


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8/16 strip, "We don't do "Company "Town" enforcement" has three double quotes, and should probably be "Company Town," with only two. "Company 'Town'" might also work.

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Saturday August 22, 2015 Panel two

The commodore has captain's bolts in the second panel.

Epaulets are correct in the third panel.

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I was going to type something witty here.....but yeah...I couldn't think of anything.

Oh but here's a favorite quote: "I would remind you
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Is Iafa a She or a He?

Broken Wind was consistently referred to with feminine pronouns, did the makeover change this?

http://www.schlockmercenary.com/2015-09-13

Cindercone says, "Iafa and I just discussed this. He's briefing the commodore."


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http://www.schlockmercenary.com/2013-09-13

First panel, "the most efficient generators, annie plants, require ptu's..."

Should not have an apostrophe.


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The strip for October 12: Massey should be saying "seem" not "seems".


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http://www.schlockmercenary.com/2015-11-11

Tagon has no rank tabs in panel one.


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The first word bubble in today's strip is missing a full stop at the end.


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January 1, central panel, top word bubble, middle of the first line: I believe "neofan" is a misspelling of "neoafan".


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April 5, Top middle panel, Sorlie is missing her bolts.

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http://www.schlockmercenary.com/2002-10-13

The comic is repeated, but without width formatting

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Sorry this is late, but Monday August 19th 2013 in the last panel it says
"I'm going go with not yet"
It should be
"I'm going to go with not yet."

Though I'm sure it's too late to change things.

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http://www.schlockmercenary.com/2007-04-01 'when came round Teff was dead'

EDIT: was two, the fist one was a misread on my part.


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http://www.schlockmercenary.com/2008-08-08 There seems to be a speech bubble tail missing in the first panel. It's clear Ebby is talking but there's no tail to him in either first or second panels.

www.schlockmercenary.com/2008-08-11 last panel, I'm fairly certain it's supposed to be 'Woe' not 'wo'.


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Kathryn's name is misspelled


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Looks like the first two panels are missing. There are no panels to correspond with this part of the transcript:

Narrator: Splattering an inbound missile is usually not a big deal. A stream of accelerated particles will suffice.
Narrator: The Tough's outriding tanks have heavy particle cannons for just this sort of work.
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http://www.schlockmercenary.com/2004-08-19

Text is "SKOOOM"
Transcript is "SFX: WHUMP"

On the next page, http://www.schlockmercenary.com/2004-08-20, we see the plant was hit, but safely defused. So "Whump" might be the right term after all. Not sure.


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"Large enough to … Small enough to…"

Should be "Small" and "Large"


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